Saturday, October 18, 2008

New versions of elephant bait

So with this first one, I lightened up the small (yet previously dark) pieces of text and tried to increase the focus on the brand name ("Elephant Bait" in this case). I wasn't quite sure how to spice up the oval with the "see back [for instructions]" bit. I straightened it up a little and made it not centered on the border. The brand is bigger but I'm not sure I've taken care of filling up all the white space on the front. I feel like something needs to be there on the upper right of the front, but not quite sure what should go there...

I made this little thing thinking I could work it in, but that didn't seem to pan out. Still thinking...

With this second one, I wanted to try to create a Nutrition Facts portion to the label to work into the design since that's something I've never done and it'd be required if this product were going to be sold. It looks like a mess to me although I suppose the Nutrition Facts are never the nicest visual addition. Maybe this will look better once it's wrapped around a real container.

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